my first ever fanfic ^^

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please dont be mean about it i am still new remember
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5214735/1/The_ten_tailed_bijuu_coming_to_a_different_world

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if you wanna be in it use this:

Name:
pic:
world: (bleach or naruto)
Rank: (both like vaizard hollow jounin etc.)
village(naruto only)
Personality:

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Name: Laharl
Pic: my first ever fanfic ^^ Laharl

World: Bleach
Rank: Vaizard Hollow Hybrid
Personality: Nice but sarcastic

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i know him

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xD i know its laharl

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from disgaea xD

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ok fanfic.net is fucked up so ill put story here ^^

Chapter: 2

Time set: when ichigo just became a vaizard and is training with them

Place: bleach

P.O.V: I=laharl

I looked around startled by the comotion. "what the hell is going on?" I ran out the door of my house. I looked up at the sky "what the hell?" There was a huge black portal sycking everything and everyone inside, I had to hang on to keep from going in. after a few minutes it dissappeared and seven figures stood on the ground where it once was alll wearing matching robes black with red clouds on them. I could feel their amazing reiatsu from half a mile away. "this power" I said having to get on one knee from the pressure "its amazing"

They walked toward me staring me down one had a huge sword. One had red eyes. One had girlly hair but by the figure and way he walked it was a he. One had spiky hair, the one next to him was a girl with blue hair. One looked like a giant venus fly trap. The last one had a pumpkin like mask on with one eye hole with the same red eye as the other one. They all were different in height but some were close.

I gasped to see they were already by me "you" The one with spiky hair pointed to me "tell us where we are"

"hueco mundo" I said scared

".... we used the wrong jutsu, we were suposed to be in kohona, thanks alot itachi" Pein said mad

"not my fault, you knew I was going blind" Itachi replied

"we didnt just teleport to a different continent we teleported to another world" tobi said taking off his mask revealing his true face, madara uchiha.

"just because you can control kyuubi doesnt mean you know everything" Kisame said receiving a blow to the head that knocked him out

"idiots" Pein sighed

"who or better yet what are you people?" I asked suddenly fearing for my own life

"we are... the Akatsuki" Konan said dramaticly "who are you?"

"I'm a vaizard" I replied

"what is that?" they all asked

After several hours of explaining from me and them we finally understood each other.

"told you kisame" Tobi replied

He growled in return

"everyone calm down" I sighed "we dont need a fight"

Pein and everyone but kisame and tobi agreed, but they fought anyway, so we all ignored them

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Chapter: 3

Place: both worlds

P.O.V: I = kurokon

Naruto, Anko and I stood on the third hokage's head. We were all smiling and naruto was waving wildly

"he finally became sanin.... amazing" Sasuke said thinking "why is he ahead of me?"

Sakura stared at him "what happened to you naruto?"

Neji glared at him "damn destiny"

Hinata fainted

The hokage appeared on the fourth hokage's head "There is a change one of these sannin will be switched"

Kiba smirked at him "your gonna get back to gennin"

"kakashi what do you think of this?" Asuma asked

"he's daydreaming again" Shikimaru sighed

Kakashi was deep in thought "what the hell is going on?"

Asuma sighed "naruto wont be the one that is replaced" He lit a ciggerrate

"what do you mean?" Kakashi asked

"hokage dont want to get him mad, he might become a missing ninja, he'd be a new orochimaru" Asuma said

"you doubt him that much?" Kakashi asked

"no but thats what the council fears"

The hokage yelled out "the replacement for Anko will be kakashi hatake"

Everyone stared at kakashi who suddenly appeared where Anko was.

"that was well...... unexpected" Asuma said

"why wouldnt they replace naruto?" Everyone asked

"he has always held back even in missions, and even with the shadow clone jutsu"

I smirked at him "more powerful than I thought" I thought

-after a few hours-

I walked back home, opened the door only to be kissed by mitsuki, even though it was accident. She blushed wildly

"what are you doing in my house?" I asked pulling my head back

She fainted and I caught her and took her to a hospital

yes this is gonna have an ocxoc and maybe some other pairs if you have requests please just ask me by reveiwing

see ya later guys

oh almost forgot...

WHOOO 3 CHAPTERS IN TWO DAYS

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Why did i faint....-.-'

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you'd see

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XD so cute fine.

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plus the heat its summer in kohona you are a mist ninja its usually 80 at the hottest

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XD that would make alot of sense.kk you saved yourself this time.

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i know ^^

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5238961/1/The_hating_worlds_we_live_in

my latest fanfic will never be discontinued XD but please reveiw

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second chapter is up